Tuesday, March 07, 2006

The Dark..

It's a magical world of its own..the mystical feeling never dies down..and it engulfs life into the clutches of imagination..the puzzling sense of gloominess looms large when you sight the stretching blanket of the stars..its the world of the dark..the world of surreal dreams and the weird nightmares..




It's a world of numbness and sober
we find everywhere only the shades of grey
Darkness is the virtue of the thinking mind
for which the disturbed soul is a prey .


Defeated hearts dwell in the dark
as they ponder over their ill stricken fate
It's time for the pessimists to take charge
to cry silently over the ignorance of their mate


The lovers relish the elegance of the dark
as they silently wish in the shadows of the night
Their thoughts race quickly to their soul mate
as they believe ,in their love they can find delight..


He compares the dark to the essence of her hair
She remembers his compliments on that candle light dinner
He finds her as the moon in the somber sky
and she endorses him as her heart's winner..


The dark is the horror of the small child
The mere thought of which makes him fear
The dreary and shady gloominess of the night
Always make him stick to someone dear..


The soft breeze dwells in the hollowness of the dark
Ghostly trees await the arrival of the knave
The prince of the dark reigns supreme
In this cruel world. ,quiet as a grave..

--Snehith.


But its life as usual for the unsighted..the blind..Nothing different,nothing new.Their world's essence had always been the same..but they see light in the same dark..the sense a ray of opportunity in watever they feel can be achieved by them.. they enlighten their world with the spark of determination and give no chance of pessimism to set in.. i think we should take inspiration from these people.."whose alphabets dont start with A B C D..but with B L A C K "...

7 comments:

Preetam said...

...and the game begins

Anonymous said...

way to go...gud begenning..first impression..quiet a gud impression

Anonymous said...

way to go...gud begenning..first impression..quiet a gud impression

sushama said...

good job !! keep up the work sweetheart! Hmm...that was a pretty thoughtful poem...makes one pause fora sec n think! amazing...

well im not a big pro in poems but the transition could have been more gradual...u know what i mean maay b ...from scariest thought to loveliest thought....i thought the lovers paragraphs (2 of them) can b the ones u can start the thought process n then go onto mare darker thoughts. or viceversa.

well thammu , coz i read poems i thought i'll suggest this to u ...if u have a reason for arranging the way u arranged, lemme know :)

neways , looking forward for more ...good job again

Snehith said...

Hmm...dint think bout that akka..i'll try it the nxt time around..

Anonymous said...

hmm.....thats pretty gud snehith.....for me ...its ...simply.......mind blowing ...:D

Anonymous said...

great work ra ....just hold on with all the gud work...u have much more in u